Nice job on this presentation! You were well composed through-out! You could have adhered to the coherence principle more by breaking the chart up about healthy weight and showing some images...images that might contradict what we see in mainstream media! I did like the consistent images of Garfield...it gave your presentation a visual theme and made it seem more professional!
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Nice job on this presentation! You were well composed through-out! You could have adhered to the coherence principle more by breaking the chart up about healthy weight and showing some images...images that might contradict what we see in mainstream media! I did like the consistent images of Garfield...it gave your presentation a visual theme and made it seem more professional!
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